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Stephen
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Mar 31, 2011 10:26AM
I bought a self-published PI novel from a local writer who asked me to provide feedback. Haven't told him yet, but the problem I saw with it was that the mystery he was solving felt too much like an academic puzzle. It was all cerebral. There was no personal risk (none of that Rockford-getting-beat-up-in-his-trailer stuff that I was reminded of in reviewing your "Blue Cheer"). Mellowing out is fine, but IMHO any time Frank runs up against a case, it should represent some kind of threat that gets his juices pumping once again.
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