Introducing Mattie and Edward, Part 1

Today I'd like you to meet Edward Kane, the hero of The Spinster's Secret. Edward fought at Waterloo and carries the scars of that battle with him.

Here he is seen through the eyes of Matilda Chapple, the heroine. Two points worth noting: (1) Mattie is six foot tall, and (2) her cousin Toby died at Waterloo.

Mattie studied Mr. Kane surreptitiously while she ate. Goliath, Toby had called him, and she understood how he’d come by that name. He was an uncommonly large gentleman, taller than she was by a good half foot, and solidly built. He looked as if he could carry the weight of a coach-and-four on those broad shoulders.

Mr. Kane had dark hair and a tanned face crossed with pink scars. She knew his age: thirty. The same age Toby would be if he were alive.

Mattie traced the scars scoring across his brow, bisecting an eyebrow, curving down his cheek. She examined his left ear. Most of it was missing. Her gaze dropped to his hands. They bore scars similar to those across his face. Three fingers were missing on his right hand, and one on his left.

Had his sword been cut from his hand? Did that account for the missing fingers?

She imagined him weaponless, trying to ward off an attack...

Her ribcage tightened. Mattie looked away from Mr. Kane’s battered hands and forced herself to think of something else. Outside, rain came down in torrents. A cold wind leaked through the cracks in the window casement. The clink of cutlery was loud in the silence: the scrape of a knife across a plate, the tiny clatter of fork tines as her uncle speared a piece of boiled mutton.

What did Mr. Kane think of so silent a meal? Perhaps he was grateful. He didn’t look like a man skilled at small talk, a man who could turn a pretty phrase as easily as he could tie his own shoelaces. He looked like a fighter.

A fighter who’d lost a battle and had almost died.


So, there you have it: one rather battered hero. And while Mattie can clearly see Edward's physical scars, she's about to learn that he's carrying some emotional ones, too.


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Published on June 13, 2017 14:16 Tags: emily-larkin, spinster-s-secret
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message 1: by Cynthia (new)

Cynthia Chan Hi Emily. I notice that you often feature maimed or ordinary looking heroes and heroines. Is there a story behind this?


message 2: by Emily (new)

Emily Larkin I think that ordinary looking heroes and heroines deserve to have someone fall madly in love with them, too! That said, quite a few of my heroes and/or heroines are gorgeous.

As for being maimed or scarred, a number of my heroes have had military careers, so that goes with the territory -- although the scars aren't always visible, e.g. Icarus Reid, whose scars are psychological.


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