A quick note about my style. I use a lot of em dashes. I also refuse (my editor's word) to capitalize the first letter in quotes if it isn't the first letter in a sentence.
Like this:
"I dunno," Pete said, "this is just my style. Suck it if you don't approve."
I do that because I like the way it looks. The way James Joyce used em dashes or didn't use quotes. It's a choice. I don't care about MLA, APA, or whatever style guide there is.
So please - if you leave a review - those aren't typos - those are choices.
Deuce out!