I love short, abrupt sentences, ellipses and intense descriptions - all that's visceral, dark and deep. Here's a very short excerpt from A Deep Dark Call (Carina Press, Harlequin) - a couple of lines from my brooding hero:

Release. This was what his marriage to her was going to bring. But not only that. It would also bring forever. And, although he’d spoken it to her, it was a word that he was somewhat scared of. Forever was a treacherous word. He knew too well. He had been married before.