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katherine gray
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Feb 09, 2018 04:19PM
I enjoyed your book. It covered a lot in the 1st story and I was finding it jumping around a bit. I very much enjoyed your change of character tone, when I did lose track I was able to distinguish which character quite quickly to re-establish who was narrating the chapter. I look forward to reading the series, you left it off at a great point. Well done!
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