Just to clarify, I've retired Evelina and replaced her with Raven, I've done this because of problems with character progression and plot lines. I've removed the 'birth of the monster' and ancient Rome sections, and will bring them all together in a separate companion volume. This has allowed me to edit, pare-down, and remove some of the worst/cheesiest bits :) Raven is faster paced and easier to follow.
You can view it here:

https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_ss...

And if anyone would like a free epub or pdf copy I would be happy to oblige.
With kind regards to all,
Tim