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Book 3 sagas…


In the last year I’ve written 80k words of my third book. That’s an average sized manuscript (both my other novels are about 78k words) so I should be celebrating. But unfortunately those 80k words are spread across two different novels, both of which I’m ditching.


So no celebrating just yet.


I enjoyed writing Glasdrum so much I wanted to stay with those characters a bit longer and write a sequel. I had various plots and themes I wanted to explore, but once I’d written around 50k words I realised I didn’t like the direction I’d taken. I’d gone for too much realism, and the story was dull. An interesting sub-plot had emerged that was more dramatic so I decided to re-write using that as the core theme of the book. I’ve become increasingly excited about this plot – it’s exactly the kind of book I want to write – but I kept running into technical issues. I found myself compromising on the story to fit it around the characters I had created for Glasdrum. Their ages and backgrounds, and the town itself, didn’t fit so well with this new story.


As an experiment, I spent the last two weeks creating a new town and set of characters to take forward the story. It’s been great fun, and all of a sudden I feel ready to start writing it. I’ve been more organised about plotting and character planning than when I wrote my first two novels – silly little things like keeping a note of a character’s hair colour or what kind of car they drive can save a lot of time at the end of the process when you’re doing a final proofread, something you don’t think about when you write your first novel – and I’m hoping that because this is the third draft of this story, the plot is clear in my head and the words will flow, fast and furious.


I will be going back to Glasdrum, but not quite yet. Blackrock is calling me for now – and it’s another dangerous place with sordid secrets!

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Published on June 10, 2018 02:44
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message 1: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Thanks for this, Fiona - all encouraging stuff for me with many bits and pieces of things that I've had to abandon at various stages through lack of time. I know you are a very busy person, so well done on working your way though it all.


message 2: by Fiona (new)

Fiona MacBain Thanks J.C. I'm glad it was encouraging. I partly wrote it to encourage myself as was rather depressed that a year on, I was still on Chapter One of Book 3, so it was nice to remind myself that I'd written the *equivalent* of another book! Sounds like you have a lot on the go too x


message 3: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Yes, always! My name is Jeanne. The "JC" happened because of my pen-name.


message 4: by Fiona (new)

Fiona MacBain I spotted that on your profile but wasn't sure if you wanted it used or not! :-)


message 5: by J.C. (new)

J.C. Yes - it's pronounced "Jeannie" - spelling mistake at my birth registration!


message 6: by Fiona (new)

Fiona MacBain Ahh! :-)


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