I was just wondering if anyone who reads these read any of my works. What would you like to see me improve on? I know grammar is a huge sticking point that I need to improve on.

But what about story structure, flow, how plot-heavy somethings could be? Perhaps even some prose suggestions

The reason I moved to Monster Girl Carnival type of storytelling is because I found anthologies a bit easier to write.

However, I wonder how people see things like Lord of Dusk that have a bit more action in it.

If you have any suggestions or even just general thoughts feel free to comment below or message me on twitter.