A fellow Pitch Wars mentor asked if we would share our successful queries, and I was more than happy to! It’s not perfect–but it landed me several full requests before I got my agent!

After a hotdog-flinging mishap, twelve-year-old Ben faces suspension at his new school in Idaho. The basketball coach strikes him a deal: he may sidestep his punishment if he replaces the school mascot he accidentally injured. Problem is, South Fork Junior High has no ordinary mascot. They are r...