I'm looking for feedback for the first two chapters of my new story, Great Barbarism. It's to help me in the long-term, and I'd rather it's from friends and writer acquaintances - beta reading isn't necessary yet. I do need help before I move forward.

Please do message me and let me know your thoughts and I'll put you on a list to receive a free copy when it's published.

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