So KOTD 4 is done! But is going thru brutal editing! My sis has some serious critiques on it, which I haven't heard yet. She's giving me space to dig, delve, do Alfred 4 right now.

I'm 10 plus chapters in on Alfred 4, getting back on it! Will Alfred and Loranna and all them make it!? The Agents of Scourge are after them!!! Agghh!

But concerning KOTD 4, I and my meany big brutal sister want to make sure it is exquisite! So rest assured, she'll let me have it and I'll fix up accordingly! I have no stubborn compunction that I am always right! I think... I did feel writing it, that I was sort of setting up for the next 'trilogy' set of books... so maybe I was a bit tame or something? I dunno! But once she's finished, she'll give me a full report, and I will make it that much more awesome! Her last and only story critique of KOTD 2-3, was that I didn't make it BRUTAL enough! Hah! Coming from a Christiany sister... that is VERY odd!

Okay okay I'll make it more brutal! We'll see! :) I'm still writing along!