Can I Get Opinions?
It's time to write a new Supervillain book. Hooray! I plan on never making Penny the main character again. Boo!
This time, I'd like to write Mirabelle. I have a story in mind, but she's a challenging main character. So, I have written the first scene of the book, and I could super use feedback on whether it's fun like Penny's books are fun.
The PDF version
The MOBI version
The EPUB version
I can't guarantee the Mobi and Epub work right. I was getting weird line wrap issues. But maybe that was my ereader.
This time, I'd like to write Mirabelle. I have a story in mind, but she's a challenging main character. So, I have written the first scene of the book, and I could super use feedback on whether it's fun like Penny's books are fun.
The PDF version
The MOBI version
The EPUB version
I can't guarantee the Mobi and Epub work right. I was getting weird line wrap issues. But maybe that was my ereader.
date
newest »
newest »
message 1:
by
David
(new)
Sep 03, 2019 07:45AM
The second half is better than the first, odd as that may seem for such a small extract. The humour and characterisation that I expect from you shows more clearly. That said, if this extract was longer - it feels forced into an overly short length, due to the exposition required - it would no doubt be just as good as the majority of the Penny books!
reply
|
flag
