(eBook version review, 2nd edition)

Writing:
"For the age of the target audience, which to me read as YA, the length of the chapters is perfect. There is enough action contained in each that propels the reading forward and just enough is left unknown to really snatch the reader’s interest as well. The balanced world-building here is well done, too. I thought it was just gritty enough to convey that dark and grim level of the stakes, but it was never off putting or too much for me. I felt that I could trust the author’s decision to reveal just enough information at the right times. It didn’t feel like an overload or like I was confused about what was going on and for me that added to the enjoyment of the way the plot moves. I need to read the next one and while I would have loved to have a full conclusion to the events that Leno and his friends have dealt with and revealed, I think the ending is handled well and definitely leaves the reader wanting the next book as soon as possible."

Cover & Map*:
"The cover art for this book is lovely and attention-grabbing... the map included is one of the best I’ve seen. I love the detail, the colors, and how well-thought-out it is. It was tremendously enjoyable to read the story and flip back to the maps to see how that geography and landscapes actually connect with the adventures. Loved it."

Reviewed by: Judge, 8th Annual Writer’s Digest Self-Published eBook Awards.

*note - color map available in eBook format, grayscale in paperback