Some of the outlining for Fallen Spire--the notes and expectations for characters and moments throughout the story--don't feel right anymore. Overall, from beginning to end, I still want to show the same images, but some of the details feel wrong. It's frustrating because I've completed a large chunk of the opening chapters, transitioning the characters and the reader through what happened between books, and parts are broken, or feeling contrived.
I know what I want, but I feel handcuffed by having split the story across two books. Still, I don't think I could have fit it all into one?

Back to work:D