I realized, as I have been adding comments to Darkness, Set Us Free that large chunks of it need to be completely rewritten.

Have you ever read books that have bled into your own style and been dissatisfied with the results? This is what I believed happened when writing Darkness, Set us Free. There seems to be a very odd narrative tone running through one of my character’s chapters. It feels like he is recounting the story to me. While it does make him feel like a good friend...