You asked for it! Let’s dive into some examples so you can see a deep point of view rewrite in action!

From time to time I ask my audience what kind of content would help them learn best, and every single time I get the same answer: examples. I dove through the cobwebs into a couple of manuscript files on my hard drive written in the early 2000s (back when I thought I had deep pov figured out and these manuscripts prove I had wildly missed the mark).

I often go over these kinds of example...