Rain

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So I came into this expecting a murder case. Which sort of happened but not really. The ending was, predictable. Just, overall it felt slow and disjointed. It didn’t take long before the issues begun to show.

The first one is the chapters. Not starting on a new page isn’t really a big deal. I’ve done this. The problem is sometimes they were still in the same scene, so it was odd they were there. And the other times enough time had passed to warrant a chap...

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Published on September 28, 2024 18:03
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