Finally finished a complete reorganized rewrite revision of part I of book 2 of Daydreamers! :D

Aaaaand it's even longer than it was before D:

Oh well, it's progress! Now that I've got a revised version of the content, I can tighten and make it shorter. And now I've gotten through this section, which had me stuck for literal years because it was such a mess, hopefully I can move steadily through the rest of book 2.

As my writing mentor always says, onwards!