A Book’s Journey: Part 13

A Book's Journey: Reawakened Flames. Edition 1 vs Edition 2. Chapter 13.

Chapter 13 in E1 is chapter 15 in E2. The chapter was very similar to the final version, with lots of little bits that were changed or cut out. I wish I had known to use Grammarly when I first wrote the book because there are plenty of red lines under mistakes in the E1 version.

Reminder: My notes will be in italicized red font, and the text from E1 will be in black. E1 refers to edition one, and E2 refers to edition two.

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Aria and Jayce eventually make their way back down to...

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