New series by Tedatom: The God Who Overslepte
The God Who Overslept
By #Tedatom
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The Second Mistake
In the beginning, God made humans with intestines many times the length of their bodies. He designed them as herbivores: the long digestive tract to break down cellulose, and molar teeth like cattle. No fangs at all.
To ensure mankind could not hunt, He made them walk on two legs. The fastest runner reaches only 44.7 km/h, the average human just 20–30 km/h. Predators run at least 70 km/h. Prey like wild horses can reach 88 km/h, antelopes 80–90 km/h.
He also freed the forelimbs so humans could gather and labor.
And then? Today humans eat anything and everything: plants, animals, insects—even apex predators like tigers, leopards, and crocodiles. If dragons existed, they too would end up on the menu.
Too slow to catch prey? Humans invented traps.
Too weak to digest? Humans cooked food and added spices.
And thus, mankind has ravaged the very world He created.
And God… is still asleep.
That was the Second Mistake.
To be continued
#TheGodWhoOverslept #TheSecondMistake #ShortStorySeries #SatiricalFiction
By #Tedatom
📖 Read Part 1 👇
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The Second Mistake
In the beginning, God made humans with intestines many times the length of their bodies. He designed them as herbivores: the long digestive tract to break down cellulose, and molar teeth like cattle. No fangs at all.
To ensure mankind could not hunt, He made them walk on two legs. The fastest runner reaches only 44.7 km/h, the average human just 20–30 km/h. Predators run at least 70 km/h. Prey like wild horses can reach 88 km/h, antelopes 80–90 km/h.
He also freed the forelimbs so humans could gather and labor.
And then? Today humans eat anything and everything: plants, animals, insects—even apex predators like tigers, leopards, and crocodiles. If dragons existed, they too would end up on the menu.
Too slow to catch prey? Humans invented traps.
Too weak to digest? Humans cooked food and added spices.
And thus, mankind has ravaged the very world He created.
And God… is still asleep.
That was the Second Mistake.
To be continued
#TheGodWhoOverslept #TheSecondMistake #ShortStorySeries #SatiricalFiction
Published on September 22, 2025 22:48
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Lullaby of Silence
LULLABY OF SILENCE
By Tedotom
I stand, watching the sky tinted with purple haze,
A gap in the clouds opens a dreamlike gate.
The wind is still. The leaves whisper old tales.
Each silence is a lullaby of li LULLABY OF SILENCE
By Tedotom
I stand, watching the sky tinted with purple haze,
A gap in the clouds opens a dreamlike gate.
The wind is still. The leaves whisper old tales.
Each silence is a lullaby of life.
Standing at a height to clearly see the horizon,
to glimpse the sky through a great hole in the clouds, to quietly listen to the breath of heaven and earth, to watch the sunset over the lake, where a faint glimmer still lingers.
5/2025 ...more
By Tedotom
I stand, watching the sky tinted with purple haze,
A gap in the clouds opens a dreamlike gate.
The wind is still. The leaves whisper old tales.
Each silence is a lullaby of li LULLABY OF SILENCE
By Tedotom
I stand, watching the sky tinted with purple haze,
A gap in the clouds opens a dreamlike gate.
The wind is still. The leaves whisper old tales.
Each silence is a lullaby of life.
Standing at a height to clearly see the horizon,
to glimpse the sky through a great hole in the clouds, to quietly listen to the breath of heaven and earth, to watch the sunset over the lake, where a faint glimmer still lingers.
5/2025 ...more
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