Better days...
I got a lot done on DDC. May finish this pass, tonight. It's up over 85K in wordage but more consistent and snottier and I only have four more chapters to go.I don't know where this attitude is coming from. But Dirc has zero concern for what he's doing to men he doesn't know...as well as a couple he does. His actions are really quite evil...but he's a nice guy. Smart. Clever, even. So I think he's sympathetic, for a monstrous rapist.
He saves Irin's life...as well as those of a couple other guys. Even converts a few men over to his way. Commits murder against a Federal Agent who tortured him. And winds up with an HEA. All completely opposite to the Judeo-Christian attitude of crime deserves punishment.
I guess having agents from Area 51 do torturous testing on him and Irin is a sort of punishment. Seems his time with Dyarvos has altered his DNA to make him a superior human, and they want to know how and why. He even gets a chance to rape his own clone, putting reality to the phrase, Go fuck yourself.
God, sometimes I can be so screwed up....
Anyway, that's why I cast this as Sci-Fi/Horror. With horror you can get away with so much more, and I don't want anyone walking into this thinking it's going to be a fun, simple fuck-fest...
Even though it is.
Feeling a lot better, obviously. It's amazing what chocolate cake with chocolate frosting will do for your sense of being. Fucks up my blood sugar, but worth it.


