Now I know what Dair and Adam look like, I feel a lot more comfortable with the story and all that happens. I can feel it, better.

The worst part about going over a draft of a book you set aside some time ago is seeing how sections it needs are not there and have to be filled in. Which also means it's going to get longer. But before you can figure out what the story really needs, all the background has to be there.

So I'm reading through and suddenly we jump from Dair and Adam finally connecting in the bedroom to Adam protecting him from Sarah's gossip by going after her cousin, Bobby. She's never liked Dair, even though she's married to his older brother, Gareth. She thinks he's been favored over Gareth and is doing all she can, subtly, to drive him out of town.

So Adam goes head to head with her, and she backs down. For now. But I need more of a lead-up to it. Right now, it's like one of those this has to happen here to keep the story going things, and I don't like that. There's also indications she's talking Adam down so he won't get odd jobs over the summer...which is damaging his ability to make a living.

I need to handle this more carefully. I've made notes, and I've fought back the impulse to deal with this issues now, putting them off till I'm done reading everything I have. But it's not easy.

I mitigated it by staying in bed and using my bed tray all day. Nice and cozy...if not so great on my butt.