i like poetry especially the portion
why give up hope
we shall struggle
we shall unite
we shall turn around the things better
we shall dream

really nice work :)we always hope for the best ,,, God bless u :)

I like da way u communicate wid vivid descriptions n subtle ideas...u seem inspired by the Romantics!

Very beautiful. My favorite part is:

We just want to be one with the divine
Sitting on a boulder near the river
Watching the torrents pass
Laying on the grass
Smelling the sweet forest pines

Like all of the best poems, this passage took me there in my mind.
Thank you for sharing. :)

Lovely
u r a true poet
and your words inspire

i neither build dreams nor much hopes
i believe in reality n whats happening in actuality!

yeah!then you're prosperous and positive thinker,
good !!!