Reblogged from authaarondennis:
Clockwork Dwarf by Bret Jordan
www.BretJordan.com
Reviewed by Aaron Dennis
www.DennisAuthor.com
Star system
I award stars for each of the following:
Story line-
Your story must hold my interest and flow well the entire time. A little ingenuity helps.
Characters-
For characters who pop and zing, distinct characters, ones with flair.
Format-
While there are different ways to tell a story and various styles can be employed, I rate according to use of passive/active voice, concise word usage, and overall feel of clarity.
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Published on December 03, 2012 15:08