Clockwork Dwarf

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Clockwork Dwarf by Bret Jordan


www.BretJordan.com


Reviewed by Aaron Dennis


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Star system


I award stars for each of the following:


Story line-


Your story must hold my interest and flow well the entire time. A little ingenuity helps.


Characters-


For characters who pop and zing, distinct characters, ones with flair.


Format-


While there are different ways to tell a story and various styles can be employed, I rate according to use of passive/active voice, concise word usage, and overall feel of clarity.


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Published on December 03, 2012 15:08
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