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Hi, Everyone.
Yes, I know it seems like I’ve dropped right off the face of the planet, but I haven’t. I’ve just been busy writing a novel. A bran new one, I might add! The three I have published are books I wrote way back in the old days. Then I went and had a major writers block for the last ten years. I wrote but never finished anything. But now I have! I’ve broken the block. Yay me!
I Just posted the first chapter of this book on wattpad if anyone is interest in giving it a read. And since I’m rather rusty at writing, I’d love to hear what you think. Do I need to fix or change things? Add more detail? Can you connect to the characters ? You know – all that good stuff.
http://www.wattpad.com/14500729
Yes, I know it seems like I’ve dropped right off the face of the planet, but I haven’t. I’ve just been busy writing a novel. A bran new one, I might add! The three I have published are books I wrote way back in the old days. Then I went and had a major writers block for the last ten years. I wrote but never finished anything. But now I have! I’ve broken the block. Yay me!
I Just posted the first chapter of this book on wattpad if anyone is interest in giving it a read. And since I’m rather rusty at writing, I’d love to hear what you think. Do I need to fix or change things? Add more detail? Can you connect to the characters ? You know – all that good stuff.
http://www.wattpad.com/14500729
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Apr 12, 2013 02:10PM
I loved it! I was so hooked! You are such a strong character writer!
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Oh, and huge congrats on getting past writer's block! :D
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I really enjoyed it and definitely would like to read the rest and figure out what is the deal with the brothers? What is it that made Ryan try to commit suicide? I like stories where along with the main character you are piecing along with them who the heck they are. Margaret you have a knack for detail and making your characters alive. I have no trouble picturing the events and the people. Normally I am more into the supernatural or murder type stories, but I also love books with strong emotions. I can definitely feel the emotions of your characters. I personally didn't read anything I didn't like and can't think of anything to improve it either. Can't wait to read the rest :)
Thank you so much, Jess. The book cover is nearly finished and I'm working on a few odds and ends, then hopefully I can get it out there for anyone who wants to read it.
