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got it and read it straight away fantastic book, i loved it, bt man do i h8 clif hangers lol and nw i hav 2 wait 12 months for the next one argh lol
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Posted one. Can't wait for the next book. I suspect that it will be the conclusion next book unless you wanted to have a part recovery and power up book and include the dwarf's but not sure if I want it to drag out longer because I enjoy the series or see a good conclusion.
I have read #1 and am reading #2. The story line is great, and I have enjoyed them very much.If I could offer a suggestion - remember that spell check does not tell you if you are spelling the wrong word correctly. Be careful of using words like roll/role, or conscious/conscience. For example, before his first battle, he talked about his "roll." Is he planning on rolling around on the ground, or was he concerned about what his job or "role" would be in the upcoming fight?
Take the time to learn. Readers love to watch authors as they grow and develop into better writers. Your story is great, but better writing could make it a blockbuster on the top ten list.



Can't wait to read it, although I think I'll review book 1 beforehand.