I submitted my edits to the manuscript to Bob Babcock of Deeds Publishing. Ceilia Stratton, the former 4ID Museum Director at Fort Hood, offered some great comments, edits, and recommendations which only makes the book that much better. Based on her advise, I utilized foot notes for explanations and I am adding a glossary for acronyms used through out the book.
One of the constants in the army is the jargon we use. I have been around the military for my entire life so the jargon is part of my nature. I forget it's almost a foreign language for those not familiar with the military.
I am still hoping for a Memorial Day release of 'What Now, Knucklehead?'