One of my favourite short stories that I've published on Kindle is The Murray Smoker.

I guess it's more of a novella than a short story. It has a choppy narrative style that I've been playing around with, jumping (sequentially) to different parts of the story.

Unlike most of my work, there's not actually any sex in this story. The characters are mainly gay, and there is some sex implied but not explicitly detailed. I am thinking that if I do a rewrite I might add some sex in just to spice it up a bit, but I'm not sure.

You can check it out here.
http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B0...