The Eternals
Working on a new book series, it should be three books. I'm still working on the first book. I have it road mapped out to the end.
I might post some of book in the forum for reader feedback.
The story about a man who finds himself being a part of the end of days. Yes, the biblical end of days. It starts off a current times and works to the literal end or beginning. It depends on how you view it. It's really my take on the politics of heaven and earth. My idea is there was a split in heaven for the following reasons...(spoiler if I say more.)
I've gotten about 1/3 of the first book complete, but it needs a rewrite to strengthen the main character's connection to the reader. I've had a couple people read the story so far and tell me the lead doesn't catch them. The other character do, but not the lead. I need for him to be more empathic to the reader. Unlike John from my first book, this character knows he has psychic gifts.
If I reflect back on A Backed Up John a book I wrote nearly 20 years ago, I see the problem with John was that he was confused and disoriented from the start of the book. A literal fish out of water, and being manipulated by everyone of importance he was interacting with. Yes, he was being manipulated by Poly. He didn't discover his voice until nearly the end of the book. I've considered writing a prologue that will resolve some of the issues. I also want to add a whos-who of gods in the book, and a music playlist.
I have other book ideas, but time is really working against me.
I might post some of book in the forum for reader feedback.
The story about a man who finds himself being a part of the end of days. Yes, the biblical end of days. It starts off a current times and works to the literal end or beginning. It depends on how you view it. It's really my take on the politics of heaven and earth. My idea is there was a split in heaven for the following reasons...(spoiler if I say more.)
I've gotten about 1/3 of the first book complete, but it needs a rewrite to strengthen the main character's connection to the reader. I've had a couple people read the story so far and tell me the lead doesn't catch them. The other character do, but not the lead. I need for him to be more empathic to the reader. Unlike John from my first book, this character knows he has psychic gifts.
If I reflect back on A Backed Up John a book I wrote nearly 20 years ago, I see the problem with John was that he was confused and disoriented from the start of the book. A literal fish out of water, and being manipulated by everyone of importance he was interacting with. Yes, he was being manipulated by Poly. He didn't discover his voice until nearly the end of the book. I've considered writing a prologue that will resolve some of the issues. I also want to add a whos-who of gods in the book, and a music playlist.
I have other book ideas, but time is really working against me.
Published on July 19, 2015 00:57
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