Oversimplified, it goes like this:

Return to Anne Carson's 'Short Talk on Shelter' -- fish heart diagram -- etymology of ventricle, of atrium -- memory of moment -- vicious pruning of moment -- fictionalizing moment -- braiding, drafting, editing -- braiding, drafting, editing -- send to Eric -- cut, cut, cut, reposition, reformat, retitle -- poem?

And running under this whole rickety hull is a benthic depth of struggle.

Notes and a fish heart diagram drawn with a shaky hand.

I'll leave you wi...