One look back

Have you ever had the chance to go back to the past and be better at something than you were?  Imagine, traveling back to your past and hitting a baseball better, throwing a football in a perfect spiral, or maybe being able to dance more smoothly.  I had a chance to experience something like this over the past couple of months without even realizing I was doing it until I was halfway through.


Three years ago I finished my first novel, Jared’s Island.  It took a long time to write and even a longer time to get up the nerve to let anyone read.  Finally in September, I published it on amazon.  The reviews were very good for the most part.  The criticism I got was mainly regarding the editing.  I had pulled it down once and edited what I believed to be wrong, then got it back online a fast as I could.  Again, the reviews that came it were good, but the editing was questioned.


By the time enough reviews had come in saying similar things, I had moved on to my next book.  I wrote and published my second book – with editing help.  Then I did the same with the third, learning a lot as time passed.  This year I decided it was time to make sure all of my writing was the way it should be.  I set three goals for the year.  I wasn’t happy with the cover of my second book, so I wanted to make it better.  Goal two was to finish my third book, since I was most of the way through it.  And my thrid goal was to go through Jared’s Island page-by-page, correcting everything wrong.


When I did, I quickly realized how much I had grown in my writing over the past three years.  By the time I was done I had removed six pages worth of unnecessary words, corrected countless errors, and re-worded many word choices.  It was not easy to admit that I had to go back and re-work my first book, but I felt I couldn’t move forward in my writing before I looked back once.


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Published on October 26, 2015 16:57
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