I've wanted to revise Gray Panthers: Battle for Earth for a while based on readers reviews. I finally completed it at the beginning of the year and released it January 7th.
Those readers who found the first edition too hard to enjoy because of bad grammar and mechanics, I heard you and fixed it.
I was able to get an experienced editor to kindly tear apart the book so it could be rebuilt better. She is also the same editor that made Gray Panthers: Dixie a much better book right out of the gate.
The "new" Gray Panthers: Battle for Earth, can be found here: http://amzn.to/1mP3t3M
Thanks again to my readers.