Over-Explaining a Scene

Let’s talk about heavy explanation in a scene. For example: I saw the light on over the door. It must be my sister, coming home late from the dance. I heard laughter outside, followed by giggling, and then quiet talking. She must be with someone. Her date brought her home, probably. I looked out the […]
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Published on January 26, 2016 02:42
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