I recently decided to do a video read of the original version and as I was reading it out loud, I realized that there were many grammatical errors. I also found that I left out key information/could have added things to the story to make it flow in a better manner. Another thing that pushed me to do a revision was the fact that I found a video on YouTube of a book club discussing the original story; the four ladies talked about the errors and the pace of the story. I realized that at the time I wrote this story, I was clearly not paying as much attention in order to have put it out like that and have it out for almost ten years. I immediately decided that the right thing to do was to revise it, get it re-edited and publish it as the revised edition. I'm truly thankful for those that read the original and gave the story glowing reviews despite the errors and the speed of the story. I'm also thankful for those that read it and pointed out the errors, I absolutely appreciate you. For those that read it going forward, I can't wait to see your reviews and/or replies as my skin has gotten thicker over the years lol!
Kai