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Hi,
The times she checked with Ev that the plan was going ahead seemed to be a little repetitive, not overly so like in some books I've read, but I do remember thinking something along the lines of 'you've said that already'. I think that's possibly more of a me thing as I'm not a fan over repetition throughout books.
That being said, I will be reading the second book as I'm interested in finding out more about Delilah"s Playground adventures.
I really appreciate you getting back to me. I am sooo happy you brought that to my attention. I will be definitely adding that to my things to check out when I do my editing and proofreading. Unfortunately I do all my editing and proofreading myself with only a handful of arc readers, and that wasn't brought to my attention. I appreciate the feedback.
Besides that issue, what did you think about the overall plot and spice?
I like the plot. I liked being there at the start of Delilah's playground adventure idea with her rather than her already doing it, if that makes sense.
The spice was well detailed, and I could see it in my head. Despite me not reading detailed ff scenes before, I wasn't put off from reading. It's definitely something for me to explore more of in books.
Thank you so much for that feedback. I am glad you enjoyed the plot. Book 2 will be out in oct 2024. My other books besides Lovers in the Stars have FF sprinkled throughout. Lola's Journey has quiet a few as she is finding herself. Thank you again and I hope you check out some of my other books.
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Hi, The times she checked with Ev that the plan was going ahead seemed to be a little repetitive, not overly so like in some books I've read, but I do remember thinking something along the lines of 'you've said that already'. I think that's possibly more of a me thing as I'm not a fan over repetition throughout books.
That being said, I will be reading the second book as I'm interested in finding out more about Delilah"s Playground adventures.
I really appreciate you getting back to me. I am sooo happy you brought that to my attention. I will be definitely adding that to my things to check out when I do my editing and proofreading. Unfortunately I do all my editing and proofreading myself with only a handful of arc readers, and that wasn't brought to my attention. I appreciate the feedback. Besides that issue, what did you think about the overall plot and spice?
I like the plot. I liked being there at the start of Delilah's playground adventure idea with her rather than her already doing it, if that makes sense. The spice was well detailed, and I could see it in my head. Despite me not reading detailed ff scenes before, I wasn't put off from reading. It's definitely something for me to explore more of in books.
Thank you so much for that feedback. I am glad you enjoyed the plot. Book 2 will be out in oct 2024. My other books besides Lovers in the Stars have FF sprinkled throughout. Lola's Journey has quiet a few as she is finding herself. Thank you again and I hope you check out some of my other books.
Thank you so much for reading Delilah's Playground and giving it a 3 star rating. I would really like your honest feedback on why you chose that rating, so it can help me grow as an author, fix, and keep things in mind moving forward. Thank you again for your time.