The "sudden" romance you bring up is a great point! As I was writing this, it was very clear to me that love and hate are two sides of the same coin, and that the intense emotion in a physical fight can suddenly switch over to lust ... but those are concepts I have played with for a long time, and for someone who hasn't, that might not seem so obvious. Apologies that I didn't do right by you as a reader on this one, and I promise to keep that in mind in my work going forward!
Also, yes, in all my longer-length fiction, you'll find that I build the emotions of all kinds of relationships with care -- and I hope you enjoy the rest of the world of the am'r!
Also, yes, in all my longer-length fiction, you'll find that I build the emotions of all kinds of relationships with care -- and I hope you enjoy the rest of the world of the am'r!