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If you’d like to leave feedback on how I can improve future books, I would greatly appreciate it! This is my second published novel, so any feedback is greatly appreciated, and thank you for reading. 🫶🏻
My whole issue is there is a great build up to the villain and the events leading to the inevitable. Then within 10 pages I felt like there was no developing resolution and they're just going to ride off after an anticlimactic ending battle. But I do love your writing style, and overall I understand novellas are probably the toughest to write because you only have so many pages to develop a full story. I would love to have a story from the harvester!
Thank you! Maybe I will write another novella next Halloween and bring him back 👀
If you’re interested, please check out ‘Where The Iris Withered,’ that one ends a liiiiiittle bit on a cliffhanger but if you liked this one, you’ll love that one. 🫶🏻
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If you’d like to leave feedback on how I can improve future books, I would greatly appreciate it! This is my second published novel, so any feedback is greatly appreciated, and thank you for reading. 🫶🏻
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My whole issue is there is a great build up to the villain and the events leading to the inevitable. Then within 10 pages I felt like there was no developing resolution and they're just going to ride off after an anticlimactic ending battle. But I do love your writing style, and overall I understand novellas are probably the toughest to write because you only have so many pages to develop a full story. I would love to have a story from the harvester!
Thank you! Maybe I will write another novella next Halloween and bring him back 👀If you’re interested, please check out ‘Where The Iris Withered,’ that one ends a liiiiiittle bit on a cliffhanger but if you liked this one, you’ll love that one. 🫶🏻
