Thank you so much for taking the time to read Dominion: Ascension and share such thoughtful feedback. I truly appreciate your insights on the story, characters, and world-building, as well as your careful attention to what resonated and what felt less convincing.
I’m glad you connected with Dani’s courage and the exploration of an unjust society, and I really value your observations about character relationships, plot details, and continuity. Your feedback is incredibly helpful, and I’m definitely making adjustments for the sequel to address some of these points.
Thank you again for engaging so thoughtfully with the book and for supporting new authors. I hope you’ll enjoy the next installment even more!
I’m glad you connected with Dani’s courage and the exploration of an unjust society, and I really value your observations about character relationships, plot details, and continuity. Your feedback is incredibly helpful, and I’m definitely making adjustments for the sequel to address some of these points.
Thank you again for engaging so thoughtfully with the book and for supporting new authors. I hope you’ll enjoy the next installment even more!
Warm regards,
D.A. Murray