River’s answer to “Why did you make Jesse such a manwhore who continued to be with other women for SO long while Bell …” > Likes and Comments

Hi River, thank you so much for taking the time to get back to me, much appreciated.

Unfortunately for me I did not like Jesse, the way I read the story he remained a manwhore for a long while after knowing Bell and being attracted to her and yes it turned me off that he was hitting on Bell while already having (in his words) a "fuck" lined up for the night, who he ended up going off with. Further on when they did get together he was disloyal with the woman he had lined up & it wasn't Jesse who stopped it, he had every intention of sleeping with her, it was only because others stopped it that things didn't get further, not him. I guess you can't win them all and this H did not work for me, he didn't earn the girl, I wanted him to work harder for his girl to show his love/dedication, I would've enjoyed reading that.

I did enjoy the 1st book & in this one after reading the blurb I was hoping for a loyal alpha, but unfortunately I didn't feel it. You have a great writing style however & I will continue to seek out your stories.

Great question Kristina and I agree with your comments. Thank you River Savage for taking the time to answer, not many authors do that so its appreciated!

I loved Jessie and bell can't wait for book 5 x

I love Jesse. I think he is hilarious but deep. He is one of my favorite characters in your series.