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No worries at all about the phrasing. It IS a difficult subject, and it's often approached in a more graphic way. I've had a number of readers tell they're glad that it's not more graphic because they wouldn't have been willing to read on. It's a tough balance to strike between treating the subject authentically, engaging the reader viscerally, and still making it readable.
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No worries at all about the phrasing. It IS a difficult subject, and it's often approached in a more graphic way. I've had a number of readers tell they're glad that it's not more graphic because they wouldn't have been willing to read on. It's a tough balance to strike between treating the subject authentically, engaging the reader viscerally, and still making it readable.

Really, it's such a tough topic, but you really shaped it into something that could be discussed.