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Just wanted to let you know that I finally found Yea Though I Walk...not easy to get but, I liked it quite a bit. I'm looking forward to your next. BTW: I just finished reading Trouble Boys. I like you and Debra Dunbar together but I really think that I can tell which passages are mostly from you. You may not take that as a compliment since I expect you'd rather it not be noticeable but, I like your style.
BTW: Most of where I can "see you" in the collaborative works is in the dialogue. Please keep that up!
I'm glad you finally got your hands on YtIW. I've always adored that story, and I'm hoping Perish from This Earth will aim just as high!
BTW, toward pulling aside the curtain a bit, Deb and I didn't trade off sections when co-authoring the White Lightning series. I wrote the entire first draft, after which she did revision and edit passes, sometimes changing voicing, sometimes cleaning up plot points. A true group effort! But it's great to know that my voice shines through so clearly!
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Jan 24, 2020 09:51AM
Just wanted to let you know that I finally found Yea Though I Walk...not easy to get but, I liked it quite a bit. I'm looking forward to your next. BTW: I just finished reading Trouble Boys. I like you and Debra Dunbar together but I really think that I can tell which passages are mostly from you. You may not take that as a compliment since I expect you'd rather it not be noticeable but, I like your style.
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BTW: Most of where I can "see you" in the collaborative works is in the dialogue. Please keep that up!
I'm glad you finally got your hands on YtIW. I've always adored that story, and I'm hoping Perish from This Earth will aim just as high!BTW, toward pulling aside the curtain a bit, Deb and I didn't trade off sections when co-authoring the White Lightning series. I wrote the entire first draft, after which she did revision and edit passes, sometimes changing voicing, sometimes cleaning up plot points. A true group effort! But it's great to know that my voice shines through so clearly!
