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Part II║↬|History|↫║
Born in Manchester, UK on October 13th. Alik was raised in a loving and wealthy family. Desiring to see more of the world he left his wealthy parents at the age of 14 where he made himself at home with a few number of relatives in different places around the world. He found America to be his least favorite, but it was pleasant.
At age 17 he discovered his parents had both died in a plane crash desiring to pay him a surprise visit in the states. Alik was devastated and could not take such a pain any longer. He quickly moved far away with the fortune of his family and left his old life behind making it into college quite easily and instead of confronting his own thoughts of the mind he instead studied on how to confront others and their thoughts of the mind.
He wanted a place far from the radar of the rest of the world and he certainly found it when arriving at Argentumbra. He was in town for almost a year before the strange things started happening. Alik made plenty of friends and threw a huge birthday party for himself inviting half of the teens and college kids of town.
It was his twenty first birthday that his entire life changed completely.
After a long night of drinking and dancing with God only knows how many people hie at last felt the effects of alcohol and it just happened that a very attractive girl wanted to give him a bit of a birthday surprise. Making his way to hsi bedroom and a full wild night of hot and ruff sex he woke up with his house trashed and some bodies laying around in odd places.
What Alik was unaware of was the fact that the girl e slept with last night was in fact a spirit witch and inflicted him with 'The Blessed Kiss'. The Spirit Witch had turned him into an incubus and it became known to him all too well that he was changing over a course of just a few days. Alik couldn't explain his dangerous sex drive beginning to believe it was just a simple addiction, but he slowly realized it to be more than that when two years ago he was called upon and sent out into Argentumbra to take lives.
At last he began to make sense of it all and between his hunger for sex and souls he worked as a Psychologist. Unable to truly control it he did a bit of research on Argentumbra discovering more and more secrets about it's own legends and myths and he at last came to the conclusion he was under a spell, cursed by a witch.
He now lives day to day trying to find the cure while avoiding killing people at the same time.
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deceased
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✔ Photography
✔ Psychology
✔ History of Myths
║↬|Dislikes|↫║
✘ Not knowing when he will change and kill
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PART I║↬|Full Name|↫║ Adrien Dmitri Alik Zherneboh
|↜║Nickname║↝| Adrien-To his family, Dmitri-to his friends, Alik-to his love interest.
║↬|Age|↫║ 24
║↬|Date of Birth|↫║ October 13th
|↜║Place of Birth║↝| Manchester, UK
|↜║How Long have you been Cursed?║↝| for nearly 3 years turned on his 21st birthday.
║↬|Gender|↫║ Male
|↜║Sexuality║↝| Was once Straight but after turning he became more open and Bisexual.
║↬|Relationship Status|↫║ Single
|↜║Infatuation║↝| None have crossed his interest just yet.
║↬|Curse|↫║ Incubus
║↬|Occupation|↫║Psychologist at Argentumbra Institution for the Clinically Insane
After going to college and being a psychology major after graduating at age 18. He went to college and being quite clever and being an athletic hero he made it through medical school rather quickly starting at age 18 the same year he graduated high school he graduated from college with a PHD in General Psychology. This gave him an open opportunity to study the mind and how it works almost as much as becoming a clinical Psychologist who helps others with their own mentality.
║↬|Physical Appearance|↫║
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLeq6m...
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|↜║Hair║↝|Brown
|↜║Eyes║↝|Hazel
|↜║Weight║↝|160 lb.
|↜║Height║↝| 6'1"
|↜║Distinguished Markings (If any)║↝| None
║↬|General Style|↫║
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║↬|Main Powers and abilities of Interest|↫║
Gains usually boosted strength, speed, and a supernatural level of beauty.
◘Sleep inducement: A being with this power can knock others out by sheer will of their aura. Someone powerful enough can make an entire block go unconscious for a small number of hours.
◘Kiss of Desire/Submission: The ability to enslave and control any being with a kiss. This makes the victims grow into a stupor almost as if dazed. The victims will give into the will of the provider of this kiss.
◘Life-Force Absorption: This ability allows incubi and succubi to feed more easily. Sucking in soul energy of poor and unlucky victims who give into lust.
◘Amokinesis: Ability to control the emotion of love or desire. Induced through speech, touch, aura, and anything possible really even mental actions.
◘Pheromone Inducement: Power to manipulate the pheromones of oneself or others. The user has complete control over the pheromones, a secreted or excreted chemical factor that triggers a social response in members of the same species, of oneself and others, including releasing pheromones that induce attraction between subjects (or within a subject for oneself), to exuding pheromones strong enough to induce sleep, change emotions and draw crowds.
◘Lust Inducement/Tactile Hyper-Sexual Arousal: The power to induce sexual arousal, lust, bliss and pleasure in others.
◘Subliminal Seduction: The ability to project seductive thoughts into subconscious and/or otherwise seduce subjects.
║↬|Personality|↫║ Graceful, generous, and friendly, Alik is a romantic dreamer to whom reality seems a dull chore. He has big hopes and dreams for the future and believes that love can indeed conquer all. Though others may see him as unrealistic, Alik believes that life can be whatever he chooses. He is enchanted by love, adventure, and excitement, but is usually too scared to take any real risks in life.
Typically Alik prefers to become involved in the lives of others rather than strike out on his own. He is a great listener and loyal friend who values his personal relationships more than anything else. That said, Alik also has great taste and has a deep admiration for luxurious things. He will often host lavish parties or events just to make others feel good, though he also has a tendency to take on too many social responsibilities, which he has a very hard time saying “no” to.
Alik wants life to be perfectly perfect, but deep down he knows that life has its ups and downs. He is among the best to have around for the ups, but is not particularly skilled at dealing with the downs. Deep down, he is insecure and relys heavily on others to build his self-esteem. He believes strongly in treating others as he would like to be treated, but is often disappointed that nobody can match his impressive social efforts. This may leave Alik feeling unappreciated and without the admiration and affection he feels he deserves.
If there is one thing that truly gets the core of Alik it is injustice. He can’t stand the thought of life being unfair and subconsciously bases a lot of his decisions on the idea that he will get ahead in life by simply being a “good person”. When this doesn't work out, he often becomes sullen, depressed, and lost in the world. Alik needs to understand that life, and the people in it, are not perfect, and that he don’t has to be either.
yeah I am and also your characters are always perfect no need to looka t her but I'm going to anyway...
okay thnx...I really tried helping her out, but clearly what runs in my mind and explaining it on post is quite different...clearly.
Savannah wrote: "Mkay, I read over Lucy's character's history. Im...not sure what to really say about it. Why would it matter if her mother was cursed? Why did the witch go into the hospital to curse that kid? She ..."As for Lucy I have no idea what else to say to her...I'm done working on it love her to death but I seriously have lost all inspiration to make that character perfected just a tad more form it's current style.
I like her alot so far, but where is the rest after Likes and Dislikes?
I didn't actually adjust i merely added a few sentences literally like two or three...lol
Your heartbeat quickens. The hairs on your arms stand straight, yet when you look over your shoulder all you see are the shadows that come with the night. Forcing the paranoia aside, you pick up your pace and face forward. Along the lines of evolution, humans' intelligence 'increased', allowing them to rationalize situations. "Oh, it was just the wind..." No...it wasn't just the wind. However, deep down humans still possess a survival instinct. It's that instinct that finally tells you to run, to get as far as possible because you aren't safe. By this time, it is too late. The shadows have surrounded you and your time is limited. The Dark Spirit Witch has found you. Welcome to Argentumbra, home of legends and spooky tales. Recently, their have been people to go missing. Some turn up, but their minds have been altered...as if they were not themselves anymore. Others come back to us in body bags. Then there are the few that never return; those ones belong to the shadows. Such events should drive everyone far from this place, not pull more to it. People are rather clueless creatures. They flock to danger like moths to a flame. Argentumbra is not safe, the exact opposite actually. There is darkness here... Those who walk among us may not be of holiness anymore, and we may not even notice. The shadows walk among us and we remain clueless to the presence of their being. Here in Argentumbra we face the darkness and we suffer for it.
Argentumbra...the place of legends and truth. The place the shadows and darkness have manifested. The place where all your nightmares become a reality.
I like your description maybe just a few small and minor changes in adjusting it and it seems perfect.
I will message Aaron As for App I do agree
I would much appreciate that for Lucy, I lvoe her to death but sometimes some people jsut are not ont he right track as with my mind and it bothers me no one can read my mind lol...
A curse cannot be passed from parent to child I have it that way so that everyone doesn't use the story that they were born with it or something like that.
Otherwise I would say it can be passed on, but if that were the case then there would be a banshee in every Irish/Scottish family of one of those families...and we can't have that...
as for the description sounds alright that way but I'll wait for the others.
lol right
thank you the description will be changed and the Poem moved to a palce that may suit it a bit more.
O'Briens it's the older spelling before th efamily divided and went in speperate palces and becomign American citizens the family name has been known to change to be mrore American as most immigrant names were. I will be getitng rid of aaron should he not make notice and I will probably be doing that tomorrow as he has until then...
It would being a Genetic altering thing, much like if there were a werewolf virus no one would eb able to identify it as niether wolf nor human it would probably be covered up byt eh governemt and state sometihng about canine DNA compromised by human DNA and therefore it would be noted as irrelivant...so yes you are ont eh right track of things ebcuase as much as it changes a person ont eh outside I beleive it would be quite detectable even for magic to be inducing it.
Savannah first things first:The Description.
you sya you cna improve it and i have full faith in you I jsut psoted the poem because I could think of nothing else.
I know you are better at almost everything about rp than myself so I want your help and it is much appreciated, as always.
So me and mods will convey messages back and forth on the production of the group.
I love it and am highly curious as to where her story leads on to...
