Ella✨(booktrovert)’s
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"Helloooooooooooo?" I scream into the infinite void. "Is anyone here?"
sometimes it helps to just choose a random place to start...
is there anything I can do to help?
ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ♡ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـҚØŤΛ ϤΛƓɪﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ♡ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ wrote: "life sucks for me and i dont know how to start my next chapter in this book"I'm sorry
slightly related: I don't even know what the flip my brother is blasting. I think it's in Portuguese?!? no one in my family speaks Portuguese...
that sucks....
I'm sorryy
how's it going?
sorry and hiiiiiiiii
lol how do you ever get stuff done? I just wanted to talk and talk and talk and be random and roll down some hills and maybe even interact with people I have to make eye contact with *gAsPs*
OK IDK WHY BUT MY ENTIRE PERSONALITY HAS JUST CHANGED INTO LOUD EXCITED BALL OF CHAOS
you don't have to know :)they look great!
hey, it's been AGES, how are the stories going?
hi guysss
<3
Editor Ella out!
I have to go now! Good luck, and I hope this was helpful.
Again, the end feels a little unfinished. Maybe it could end when they just arrive at wherever they are going?
It's developed and interesting. There are a few missed punctuation marks, but aside from that there's nothing to fix.
There's a period missing in the third paragraph of Camp Hell's Mouth.
