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Something I made up that only her school does. Its a group of kids that do things for the school and stuff. Like: help new kids; be the decorators; and whatever else I come up with, I made it up for a reason though, ulll see!
♫Krista♫ wrote: "♪*B*♪ Music is my Passion! wrote: "Krista, your the only one who reads my stories anymore!"No Way??????"
Yeah, pretty much, i'm trying to finish another chapter of Wings of Forever btw!
I'm not sure on the title of this one yet. Its a vampire story. The first chapters not very captivating... none of my first chapters are *Shruggs*I sat on the floor of my bedroom, searching for my earring. I lay down beside my dresser, by golden hair spread out around me, and looked under it. Nothing. “Where are you? Come on, I just dropped you!” and suddenly there was a glint to the left of me. I crawled over, and there was my earring, under my bed, half hidden by the folds of my sheets that fell to the floor. I could have sworn-the song ‘Call Me’ rang through the room. I placed my earring on my dresser, and grabbed my phone. I didn’t need the caller ID to know it was my best friend Isabelle, because ‘Call Me’ was set for only her number.
“Hello, you’ve reached Aria Zarcoff, leave a message after the beep. Beeeep!” I said into the phone, and my friend’s cheerful laugh answered,
“Ri! That’s not what your answering machine says!” Iz said
“What if I changed it?” I retorted
“That was a totally fake beep!”
“You got me there.” I said, and laughed. I could practically see her smiling into the phone. “What’s up?” I asked.
“Huh? Oh, right,” that’s Iz, my scatterbrained bff “I was thinking of having a get together Friday. You know, with lots of people to celebrate the New Year and to welcome the new kids.”
“And you want me to…”
“Help with the invitations and the planning?” She said it like a question
“Ok, sure! It’s not like I’ve got anything important to do anyway” I could tell she was beaming,
“Great!” There was a shout in the background that I couldn’t quite make out. “Oh, got to go. See you tomorrow! First day of school! 10th Grade! Yay!” there was a click, and then silence.
I slipped my phone into my pocket and went over to my computer. I used to have a dinosaur, but my mom had decided I needed a newer one when I turned 12, she said it was for school reports and research, but I knew better, my mom just loved spoiling me.
I pressed the on button, and waited. When it stopped loading, I went to some of my favorite sites, then checked my email. I had 75 messages, those stupid weekly website emails. I deleted all of those, and there were 13 messages left. A lot of them were forwards, I deleted those, and was left with 4 messages. I opened the one from Isabelle:
Hey Ri! In case I 4get 2 call u, I’m throwing a party Friday, & was wondering if ud help out. Please! I got Hanna, Mia, Jesse, Benny, April, Kevin, Avery, Willa, Vic, Lia and Danny to agree! But we need ur help! ur the most creative!!
☺, Iz!!
I laughed, at least she thought to send this. I quickly typed back:
Its a good thing you remembered to call me! But its good to know all our friends are helping out too! ♥, Ri!
I went back to mail, and opened the one above Iz’s, it was from Jesse.
I was just conned into helping with Iz’s party! Did she reel you in too? Except I wasn’t exactly “reeled” it was more like “forced” Do you know who else is helping? Come on! Tell me! Now! No wait…when you get this type back IMMEDIATELY!
I rolled my eyes and replied:
Yes, I was reeled in too, but I chose to help, I wasn’t forced. Hanna, Mia, Benny, April, Kevin, Avery, Willa, Vic, Lia and Danny are also helping.
P.S. I did write back IMMEDIATELY! ☺
♥, Ri!
The next one was from my dad, who was away on a business trip.
Hi Hunney! I just wanted to say hi, wondering whats up, and also tell you that I got you a present! But I won’t tell you what it is yet, don’t want to spoil it!
I didn’t write back, because I knew it would be a rather long email, and went on to the last one.
This one said it was from the school. Great.
Dear Aria Zarcoff,
We are proud to welcome you to the Honors Committee. As your first honorable duty, you will be welcoming the new students in your grade this year. You have been assigned a student to help and befriend and will receive that assignment August 26. I hope you enjoy your new year and have high hopes for you.
Sincerely,
Principle Tiffany Wes
What the heck!? I didn’t sign up for Honors Committee! My brow furrowed. Iz had said she wanted to join the Committee, and had asked me if I wanted to do it with her. What had I said? I slapped my forehead. I had been caught up in rushing home, that I had said “Sure, sounds like fun.” And run off. Well, At least I’d know all the new people for Iz’s bash on Friday.
Title: Vampire AcademyAuthor: Michelle Read
Publisher: not sure
Type of Book: Fantasy-Vampire
I dont want to write the rest...
is it m-aw-ra ok...I'm not sure if aw, was the right one, but is it like a au sound? like in Auzra or Awesome?I love that name by the way!




