Annie’s Comments (group member since Apr 07, 2009)

Annie’s comments from the You Write the Story group.

sure np

:) cool

what the imaginary and real worlds look like:

hmmm i like the ideas of both of yours. lets mash them together. i like the unrealistic idea from both of you and i definitely agree. i think the imaginary world should be as far from our own world as possible.

rachel, your idea for a different color scheme is excellent; i was thinking the same thing myself except for one thing. i was thinking that her real world would be dark and black and without much color, reflecting the anthea's life and moods.

her imaginary world, in contrast, would be full of color and sunlight. until, of course, her "aunt and uncle" characters come and the darkness and blackness spreads.


also, once her aunt and uncle are defeated and she finally returns to her real world, she can meet the guy (dante) and color will spread through that world and she will realize that the real world is not as bad as it seems.

cool :)

hmmm i like the ideas of both of yours. lets mash them together. i like the unrealistic idea from both of you and i definitely agree. i think the imaginary world should be as far from our own world as possible.

rachel, your idea for a different color scheme is excellent; i was thinking the same thing myself except for one thing. i was thinking that her real world would be dark and black and without much color, reflecting the anthea's life and moods.

her imaginary world, in contrast, would be full of color and sunlight. until, of course, her "aunt and uncle" characters come and the darkness and blackness spreads.


also, once her aunt and uncle are defeated and she finally returns to her real world, she can meet the guy (dante) and color will spread through that world and she will realize that the real world is not as bad as it seems.

what do you think?

??? :)

:) sorry 4 the confusion

:) first, what does anthea's imaginary world look like?

:) ok so lets get going

ummm ok :)

yup we can do it

wow rachel

yah krista isnt red lobster yummy?

Nice :) I love red lobster

Wow rachel sounds like ur an expert :) I had a crab sushi I think....it had something else in it too but none of it was raw and it still wasn't good

ok so heres what we need to do:

decide what anthea's imaginary (and real) worlds look like, the exact ages of anthea and dante, the characteristics of anthea and dante, the appearance of the supporting characters, the characteristics of the supporting characters, a detailed plot line, decide the setting (exactly) and, eventually, write the story.

looks like a lot, but we can do it.

Boy Character:

should have light or slightly tanned skin, any color hair, no moustache :), lovely eyes, and be anywhere between 16-18.

NAME:

Dante

PICTURE:

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Girl Character:

shes either blonde, brunette, redhead, or has black hair.

she has light skin and piercing, sad, beautiful eyes.

she should be between 15-17 maybe a bit older

NAME:
Anthea

PICTURE:

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Summary of the Story:

the girl lives with her mean/evil aunt and uncle. because her life is so bad, she escapes into this imagination land and lives there in her imagination. she meets her prince (cinderella story). but, since all her real life acquaintances are in her imagination, (the prince is one of her friends in real life) her aunt and uncle are in it too. they are the villains. so, she, her prince, the magical creatures of her land, and the other magical people in that land (they could actually be real life people as well, transferred into her dream) band together to defeat her evil aunt and uncle. in the real world, the girl stays in a coma for her whole life, since she defeats her evil aunt and uncle in the imaginary world and decides to keep living there.

(optional ending: the girl wakes up out of her coma and meets her prince.)

Okay guys! This is everything we have done and decided so far. If I miss anything, please leave a comment and I will update it.

Please do not post any comments on anything other than info that I missed about the characters, setting, plot, etc.

Also, do not put suggestions into this topic. Suggestions go into the 'Should We Get Started?' topic.

Any comments not necessary will be removed.

Thanks,

Annie

ok rachel ill try to get a summary up :) ill post it soon