Sierra~Kelley’s Comments (group member since Jun 02, 2012)

Sierra~Kelley’s comments from the The group where you quench your bordem group.

Helloooooooooooooooooo???????????????
Anybody home?

Not yet!I was planning on reading it soon but your review makes me wanna run to a bookstore right NOW.

YES!!!!

I did and it's still me

I looooove Cinder:)

Hey!

Seranadia approached the deep voice with careful steps.
"What is your name?",he asked.
"Seranadia",she answered.He was still in the dark.He slowly stepped forward.
"Well,Seranadia,I am your instructor"

Seranadia edged towards the ditch-hole(? Don't laugh!).She didn't want to be the last one facing it.So she decided to go first.She closed her eyes,taking a deep breath.
And then all she felt was the air as it whistled past her ears and cooled her face.She fell face-first onto something..soft.She realized that it was a net.
"Welcome".A deep voice echoed.

Seranadia watched as the boys stood up.She could sense his nervousness.
"Or I could go first?",she suggested,even though she was a bit scared.

Seranadia balked.
"No way.That's..that's too um-not safe"

Seranadia had no idea what to expect once she got there.The only thing she knew was either that this could be a beginning of something new or this could be her final stand.
((Ditch-hole right?They jump through that to get to Dauntless headquarters?))

Or it could be said that way as well:P

Seranadia looked up at the boy as she slid to the ground.
"Yeah,I'm fine.Thanks",she added.In Erudite,they were never taught to board a running train,maybe to get a running train to stop but never get on it.
She knew this was a new beginning.She realized this wasn't going to be the last time either.

How stupid are we!

Hey Ella!Welcome to the group:D

Fears

Oh really?Thanks!I was too lazy to count anyways:P

Seranadia got in the train and collapsed onto the wall,breathing hard.

hehe:P

Seranadia kept running till the edge and then kicked off in the last second.She caught hold of the handle,trying to pull herself in.