Jessica’s Comments (group member since Oct 03, 2012)

Jessica’s comments from the Kingdom of Barath *Advanced* group.

((I am sorry, but have a big family emergency so i will not be on for a while. Go ahead and kill my charries or someone else take them...i have no idea how long i will be gone. Happy holidays))

((K, i can start it...need to settle in, just finished chritmas shopping...i know i'm late! Lol))

"Handling poorly? No, none of the lords are letting it all out like u asked. Not even I, sadly. With what u were dealt, ur doing a good job of it. Dont kid urself, not everyone could do what ur doing."

I like that idea...hannah? Maybe brother and sister r rivals???

Oh i will play brother only if no one else will

((i am loving this meeting. and thanks for thinking that Lord William will be a good king. My idea for Lord William is that he tries to stay out of it but he is going to end up being at war.....perhaps die. For deep down he wants to be king. He loves the people of all lands, not just his. So lords that are supporters could start talking to him, if u like.))

Lord William was so glad to get out of that room. He saw how the other lords just got up and began quieter conversations. Lord William wanted to talk to Asher, but he really needed fresh air first. He took a short cut, and found himself outside the castle walls. Breathing the cool air in, he began to think about the meeting.

He agreed with what Asher had said. He did see how no one was being completely truthful except that right hand, before he had been dismissed. A lot of what he said was so true, that was the type of honesty that was needed right now. Just not so much emotion or tempers would flare and accusations be thrown...the opposite of trying to keep peace. Actually this whole idea of this meeting was laughable. Everyone, including the people, had their own reasons why the kingdom was in a sorry state. They all agreed, silently, that it comes down to first having a new king.

Lord William began walking back towards the meeting and thought how he really should speak up more. Its just that deep down, his honor was the most important thing to him, except his family and people. Also he believed that not Asher should be the next king, but him and his family. He did like Asher and saw he held great qualities for a king.....but that is one day, not now. Lord William let himself think in the clouds for a second: if he had the crown again, his family ruling in Maneara, he would have his daughter, Jaquelyn marry Asher then Asher would take the throne in the future. In the meantime, he would finish molding Asher to be a great king. (I just forgot, does William have a son? if not, i want to keep it that way till future)

Lord William came back into the room, feeling much better and saw everyone was still on break. He walked over to Asher, "My prince, you are handling such a tough situation with such finesse. One of your many admirable qualities."

((is it ok that Lord William feels almost fatherly towards Asher...and Asher either feels the same back or at least sees William's wisdom and respects him for it. What do u think? Oh I didn't add anything but could Kron and William be like good friends, we can have them talk more amoungst themselves and William will admit outloud his idea for wanting the crown to his close friend. How do any of these ideas sound?))

((hey girls, sorry that i had left u hanging. it was my intention to let my maid go fetch and you two begin to rp....so it all worked out good))

((i will try but no gaurantee, but since its Friday, i will stay up late tonight...so perhaps. I will try, u know how it is with me. Anyway I kinda am wanting Sabrina to tell the truth to my charrie but if u dont want that (since she is wanted, ect) tell me and I will have my charrie back off))

((then since i have to go, the meeting is on break till tommorrow...unless u have more to add. its so much fun rp'ing with u again!))

((i think the meeting tired even ME out, lol))

((gotta get off soon, have a good night))

"My lady, I only ask for your forgivness. I know all actions have consequences so I am not one to run from something when I am wrong. I will be back shortly. There is a gaurd just down the hall, I will get him to be by you till Mr. Braylin comes. It will only be a moment."

((a guard will come before Sabrina can finish))

((but i agree its the king! lol))

Arthur began taking notes of what everyone talked about. The lords talked about the welfare of the people, if they are really happy. The sad truth why taxes had to go up where in the long run it would help everyone. Ofcourse the King was mentioned again and again. Arthur even wrote those reasons down. The lords mentioned of wives tales about witches and fear in the kingdom. Lack of communication with all the lords now, yet travel was so hard. Trust and loyalty were key reasons for war.

The meeting was long and tedious. By the time, Prince Asher took a break. Everyone knew nothing was going to be solved by just talking. Talking was making everyone run in circles in their heads. It was action that was needed and nothing subtle. And that is where Braylin had a point, he hated to admit. But he knew his duty was not to get involved and protect the King.

((how's that?))

"My apologies lady, forgive my boldness. I am not normally like this. Please forgive me. There is no need for my name. I promise that after i find Mr. Braylin Wes, I will go to the appropriate authorities for my punishment and tell them you need another apology." Marie bowed and began to slowly back away but not putting her back to the lady in the beautiful dress. She still felt something was off, but being reminded of her place made her squash all of her courage. She had every intention of "fetching" Mr. Braylin then adimit to him how she had stepped out of place with his lady friend. Then she knew she would need to go to the royal gaurds for her lashings. This thought almost put tears in her eyes, for she knew the guards would do more than just lashings. She guessed she deserved it cause she did speak out of place.

((crap! i am at a loss for what to rp for the meeting now, lol))

Marie listened to the story. It sounded very convincing and she almost went to "fetch Braylin Wes" but something inside her told her something was still amiss. Usually Marie does not listen to herself, and continues with her duties...its how she stays out of trouble, but like she reminded herself...its her birthday, what the hell. Whats another set of lashings to her compared to for once listening to her own gut.

"My dear lady, your story is plausible and very true about Mr. Braylin's temper. But I was there when everyone arrived yesterday and since. I have eyes and ears all over the castle. So who are you really?" This time Marie looked up when she spoke. And spoke with more of a confident tone. She didn't have ears all over the castle. But she did make it her personal business to know about the royals and lords. Kinda like how one tries to learn everything about a celebrity.

She knew she would never hear the end of it, if she was mistaken. But she felt this "lady" was not who she appeared. Something about how she was so quiet in her steps, her confidence is different from the other ladys, and just something that Marie couldn't put her finger on.

((oh Marie is suspicious but if u choose to let her know who your charrie really is, she will be a friend not an enemy))

Lord William listened to the young chap's words. Words full of emotion and anger. And yes, there was truth what he had said too. They just don't understand how hard it is to be a king. And at the beginning, his friend was a great king, but things happened. Granted Lord William would do things differently and be better....he quickly stopped that train of thought. Lord William decided it would be best to stay quiet now, for he did not like these meetings anyway.

The right hand, Arthur, then spoke up. "Lords, you all are having good points of views on the situation. But we are beginning to miss the actual issue. The issue is how to make things better, prepare for a war that is coming, and keep bonds strong for this all when it happens. Only together will we all thrive." Arthur knew how Braylin was with his emotions and words. He had a sense, soon the discussions would be out of hand and he only wanted to soothe things over and continue with the meeting. He kept his own opinions to himself. He was the king's right hand, and with that came responsibilty and that meant he was on the king's side no matter what his personal feelings were. Out of everyone, though, Arthur liked what Lord William had said. It was true. He knew William had a knack to make the worst storm sound like a drizzle but what he said sounded wise and not many would be able to see the whole picture of all the years like he did.

Marie kept her distance but stayed in eye sight of the blue dress. Now the blue of the dress intrigued Marie, but as she followed she noticed other things too. She noticed this lady walked quietly and like she had a destination on her mind. She acted like no other lady Marie had seen. Come to think of it, Marie has seen all the ladies in this castle, and she has never seen this one. This puzzled Marie for a second.

Then Marie saw where the blue dress stopped. It was at a door that wasn't extravagant like so many others in the castle, but still very heavy and well made. Marie knew where this led. There was no way this lady, one unknown to her, would want anything behind this door. Marie then thought maybe she is lost.

Marie only took a few seconds to decided what to do. She decided to go and see if she could help this lady find her way. "Ma'am" she bowed deeply as she came closer to Sabrina. "May I help you. I know how this castle is big and confusing. I get confused all the time and I have been living here since I was a babe." Marie kept her eyes to the floor and tried to act like she was supposed to when around lords and ladys. She didn't just out right say that the woman was lost or that no way she was wanting what was behind that door. Marie kept her mouth shut on those points. She had kept her talking short and in a quiet voice, hoping not to end up with lashings for this incident.

Marie was cleaning parts of the castle that are used often, but for the moment was empty since the lords had a big meeting. She needed a break. She kept a rag in her hand, just in case she needed to look busy. She began to walk the halls quietly since her shoes barely had soles. As she went outside from the side of the castle, she could see some of the gardens. The gardens were pretty but what caught her eye was a blue gown. It was so beautiful. And blue was her favorite color. She normally didn't even think of doing something like this, but today was her birthday, what the hell. She kept her distance but began to follow the blue dress. (she is not the best in stealth, not bad but Sabrina could pick up that she is being followed)

Name: Marie (last name is unknown)
Age: 22
Gender: female
Mother and Father: orphaned and unknown
Rank:(Listed above) peasant; works in castle in Manera
Relationship: (Married off? Fell in love?) single
Living: (What city were you born in and where are you currently living?) found on the streets of Manera and now lives and works in the castle as a servant
Species: (Human, Witch)human
Appearance: (Written or picture)http://th01.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i...
Take away the makeup and jewelry, she is a peasant
Personality: curious naturally but tries to keep that down since she is so low on the ladder. does her duties as a servant excellent, but takes no credit. grateful that she even has a roof over her head. humble and quiet usually. hears what goes on behind closed doors since she stays invisible, and does have her own opinions but never speaks them for she feels its not her place. her world is small - being a servant does not matter who the king is or war for that matter
History: A cook from the castle found her as an infant on the streets one day when out shopping for specific ingredients. The cook was a kind old woman and always wanted a child. The cook took her in and cared for her and kept it secret that a baby was living in her quarters. Eventually, it was found out. This matter was never even taken to the king, a royal guard decided to kill the cook on site. She was spared though. As soon as she could, she was put to work. Turns out when she was older and easy on the eyes, the royal gaurds would send for her as entertainment. At first she hated it, now she sees it as one of her duties to live. She has many friends in the castle that are peasants, who have helped her grow.
Skills: she is good at cleaning anything from armor to pots and pans
Other: her quiet demeanor keeps her invisible most times, but she is really a beautiful young woman. she doesn't (and maybe never) knows about her real parents. Her real parents were witches and did not abandon her, but was killed. So by blood, she is a witch but has no knowledge of it and maybe never. Her hidden talent (if it ever comes out) is potion making like her mother.

((I added more depth to this charrie just in case I want to play her more))

After this comment, Lord William felt he needed to speak up too. "Maximus, you are young and will see there is no one person to blame. All of you have both good and bad traits, even I. The king has his fair share of both too. He is just under the microscope, unlike the rest of us. Asher, you are known as a hardworker and one day will be an excellent king. Braylin, people know you for your courage. Kron, you are known as the fearless kind giant. Maximus, you are known for how you will speak the truth. All of us have the good traits, but we also have the bad traits, including I. It is not easy to rule an entire kingdom. I am not saying Maximus is wrong, just remember there is more then just one person that is accountable." Lord William finished. (I don't want him to sound condescending in any manner...just kind and wise words) He could see where Maximus was coming from and Maximus was young and strong willed. He posessed virtues that will one day make him one of the great lords if molded correctly. Lord William knew that his dear old friend, and king, was on the downhill, but Lord William was loyal to the crown. He also remembered how hard times are just for him to take care of his people. Yes, he has made many mistakes and has learned and grown from it. He wondered if it wasn't too late for that to happen to his friend.