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"On page 129, Story has finally started to kick off and I'm grateful for that. I also really like how Nina doesn't betray the way Crier believes for the sake of softening the love aspect or making her more palatable. She's still clear that her orders should be followed, but naive as to why people would struggle with that. It's refreshing in a way. Also appreciated the way she wrote the start of Crier's dissent with the dias scene" — 18 hours, 50 min ago
"On page 129, Story has finally started to kick off and I'm grateful for that. I also really like how Nina doesn't betray the way Crier believes for the sake of softening the love aspect or making her more palatable. She's still clear that her orders should be followed, but naive as to why people would struggle with that. It's refreshing in a way. Also appreciated the way she wrote the start of Crier's dissent with the dias scene" — 18 hours, 50 min ago
