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50 Shades was...good...but a bit on the immature side of the genre. I felt as though I was a young child sneaking mommy's romance novels. It made me giggle when most readers not used to reading this type of thing had their hand in their pants.

"Her Own Serenity" leads a reader down a similar path, but with a bit more of a maturity to it.
The mystery and passion of following what the lovers do.

“A peek inside the door”

“Nice title, somewhat naughty.. intriguing.
The exposition is simply marv. I like the settings you have described. Your details. So heart felt. One sentence put tears in my eyes. I loved your use of words and lines that are descriptive..”my heart began to beat a bit faster” – “windowsill” – “key slid in like butter”.

I think you are VERY skilled in you narratives, very, very skilled. I haven’t come across narration so velvet like in my whole academic life. You are a master. “I knew that one day someone would be sitting here and in this very spot reading what she had written so long ago”. ” i opened the hard cover and began to read it”. This line made me yell “OH SHIT” out loud. That’s how sexy your introduction was. Keep up this good work.
-Vincent A.”
www.juliabecca.com

The list has been cleaned up and all paranormal books removed. Enjoy!