Michele Wesley
Here goes my attempt:
After I dragged my weighted body from my mattress, I peeled open one eye and my bedroom mirror showed me the distorted view of a fist-size hole in the side of my head and my brains splatter all over the walls. My brother did this to me as my wife watched, and although I didn’t yet know if I was dead or alive, revenge permeated the air heavier than the potent rusted sent of my blood.
After I dragged my weighted body from my mattress, I peeled open one eye and my bedroom mirror showed me the distorted view of a fist-size hole in the side of my head and my brains splatter all over the walls. My brother did this to me as my wife watched, and although I didn’t yet know if I was dead or alive, revenge permeated the air heavier than the potent rusted sent of my blood.
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